This part serves more to guide readers to a certain answer than it does to clarify what is being asked.
What?
You meant “do” not “due” right?
How about, we make it completely stun resistant during charges, but make it extra vulnerable to stunning during specific parts of other animations?
I think you meant all, not both, unless I was supposed to understand that some of those quotes weren’t to be achieved, or that all of those quotes are the same thing. If they are supposed to be perceived as one thing, (and the preceding paragraph as the other thing,) then the paragraph with the quotes probably should end with a sentence that sums up and ties together the paragraph as a whole.
Horror is all about building suspense, not about having flashy ranged attacks flying around. I’d say a better form of attack for something as scary as the anomaly would be to have greater audio and visual disruption and greater health loss the further into the Aether Medium one goes. The health loss could be in the form of constant damage, but I think having a delay between the damage (similar to the damage you get in Don’t Starve/Don’t Starve Together for being in darkness) to create a sense of suspense between hits and a sense of panic when trying to get away from the center of the Aether before the next hit.
Did you mean explored or explained, or did you intentionally use the word exploded in a nonstandard way.
Yep. I can’t say I ever want to read it again.