The Development of a Villain in the Singleplayer Campaign of Unturned II, a Detailed Analysis and Suggestion

Face it. There’s no point in a singleplayer campaign without a good story, otherwise singleplayer is almost useless except for testing shit. And in order to have a good story, there needs to be a good antagonist. What makes a good antagonist? Well, I’m glad you asked.

  1. He has many of the same characteristics of the protagonist, but they’re just misdirected.
  2. He’s a likeable character and has a sense of humor.
  3. He’s enough of a decent fighter that you have to give him some respect.
  4. He’s occasionally kind, and his softer side shows every once in a while.
  5. He’ll stop at nothing to get what he wants.

Of course, not all of these qualities apply to every villain, however, most goods one contain one or more of the aforementioned qualities.

Oh, right, and:

  1. He is a complete and total badass if he feels like it. Also, he comes up with good one-liners and punchlines.

A good example of the last one is a Japanese officer that appeared in this one Chinese action/drama flick. The scene takes place as a chorus of girls are rehearsing a song to represent the transition of power and whatnot, and one of the girls, in her distress, breaks out in tears as she is having difficulty remembering the lyrics. The officer strolls over and comforts her, and keep in mind that this is one of the men who orchestrated the Rape of Nanking, a period of several weeks where thousands of Japanese troops went off in a spree of murder, looting, robbery, and rape. The officer then recites a Chinese poem, which if you want to know exactly what it was, is:

秦时明月汉时关
万里长征人未还
但使龙城飞将在
不教胡马度阴山

Essentially this poem translates into:
“The moon is the same as that of Qin and Han,
Men journey for thousands of miles, and yet none return home.
But as long as the Dragon general of Longchen is here,
Never shall an enemy pass the Yinshan border.”

The reciting of the poem was an example of extreme irony as it was written to celebrate the defense of China against outside invaders, and sure enough, as he turns his back to leave, he asks his men: “And who might the hu ma (the Huns that invaded China during the Qin and Han dynasties) be?”

His men reply with a chorus of “We are the enemy,” before prompty gunning down every single one of the girls except for the one that screwed up and couldn’t remember the lyrics.

The officer in question is a perfect example of the villain archetype, a man that appreciates culture, uses irony well, and yet has a dark and twisted psyche. And I believe Unturned II’s story campaign needs a similar antagonist.

15 Likes

Just watch. A recreation of me is gonna be the protagonist, and people can go kill him over and over again when they hate me.
Edit. I meant ANTAGONIST not PROTAGONIST

Sarcasm aside, This seems like an alright idea. But how would it be implemented?

1 Like

I do like this idea, but if it happens I’d like to at least see a “change to regular survival gamemode” option of sorts. I wonder how villains and lore would play on Unturned II lol

Also Nelson liked your post, does this mean it confirmed?1?1??!!

I mean lmao epic stalker funny image

3 Likes

I think if you play as a Coalition officer/on the side of the Coalition or a survivor group then the antagonist should be a corrupt military officer, or something of the like. And maybe vice versa if your side is with the military.

1 Like

plot twist: we wuz the antagonists /s

4 Likes

Nice idea. How do you suggest this should be implemented?
Let’s just start pooling ideas.

You’ve created the personality, though what is his goal? He can’t just be some edgy character trying to gain your attention.

Maybe that’s what Nelson can decide

10 Likes

Most of the great villains in video games usually have a superior motive to that of the Player, and make the player question their own decisions.

I honestly thought if there was going to be an antagonist in the story, it would be some SC-7 director who was tired of all of the pain that humanity would go through, so he attempts to wipe it out and start fresh with the survivors being the new blood.

It’s just an idea but something more stereotypical could work too.

2 Likes

Uhuhnuh.
We don’t wan’t another Joker/Batman thing going on here.

would be interesting if the coalition had some sort of mutiny/coup within itself

1 Like

y’know what’d be e v e n c o o l e r

if you got to pick which side you fought for, so like, the rebels or the coalition
that’d be so fucking epic

4 Likes

Negan ehehehehhe

Yeah, Negan is actually a good example.

Hell yeah , I would love to see a charismatic antagonist in unturned single player .

Siding with Scorpion-7 could either be the evil or neutral ending, depending on if Nelson changed their motivation.

Syndicate could also be an evil/neutral ending, but it’s up to the player’s choice on who to fight in the end.

Coalition is either the good/neutral ending. Good ending would be when you defeat the coup/SC-7. Neutral would be eliminating the Syndicate.

I think this guy is a good example too

1 Like

[Speech 80] I can agree with that
[Intelligence 7] I think he might need some tweaking to be a good fit
[Yarr at heart] Avast! He be the one we’re looking for!

1 Like

Hmm, a villian in a zombie apocalypse could work but there needs to be some reason he is doing what he is doing, like Negan in the walking dead is trying to gain control of almost everything he possibly can.

Is he better than this?

quick Google search
How to piss off every star Wars fan